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[Once-Dead] Toren (Competitor)

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| Toren (Additional Ref) |

Jaya (Competitor) | Caspian (NPC) | Spinner (NPC) | Audition |

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Name: Toren
Gender: Male
Species: Elemental elf 
Age: 13
Height: 160cm
Weight: 50kg
Personality: Essentially, he acts like a spoiled brat. However he's a very good actor and can act nice and sweet, or like a different person altogether if he needs to get on people's good side or achieve something. The spoiled brat persona is an act too, because he is capable of being mature, on the few occasions when he openly shows it. He can be (rarely) genuinely nice to Jaya, but not many other people. 
Likes:

  • Anything sweet. The sweeter the better.
  • Eating, and food, in general, even if it's not sweet. 
  • The satisfaction he gets when he's beaten, tricked, or otherwise bettered someone else.

Dislikes:

  • Feeling hungry. 
  • Being looked down on/disrespected/patronised/disobeyed for whatever reason, but it's usually mostly his fault because he doesn't usually act deservingly of respect. 
  • Watery environments, as they can make his lightning harder to control and dangerous. 
  • Being referred to as 'prince' or 'your highness' because firstly, it's slightly embarrassing because he feels like he's not really a prince anymore (having no real storyline to back it up) and second, he can never really tell if someone's saying it sincerely, or just to make fun of him. 

Strengths:

  • Lightning creation and manipulation, it generally starts out near his hands but potentially can create it anywhere within a 20-meter radius (outside this it's possible but takes more effort, is harder to control precisely, and can be weaker in strength). He can shoot the lightning to distances over 20 meters away, it just has to start out inside the radius if he wants to more control. 
  • Because his primary skill is making lightning, he's unaffected by electric shocks and sudden flashing bright lights. 
  • Agile and quick, also dextrous and good at sleight of hand (i.e. can pull out a knife and stab you before you can even notice)
  • I made him a literal genius (because OBVIOUSLY. That's the thing you do when you're thirteen and creating characters, right?) So... yes, he's very, very smart. 

Weaknesses:

  • He's a tiny little elf kid so he's low on physical strength, though he's sturdy enough to take a few hits he can't deal much physical damage without the aid of some kind of weapon. 
  • Water has the tendency to screw up his lightning accuracy, as in it will dissipate it and spread really quickly, so it's dangerous (not to him, but to any allies) for him to use lightning if it's raining or they're standing in a lake, or something.

Fighting Style: Highly dependent on his lightning summoning, which can be used both close and long range since he doesn't have to worry about electrocuting himself. He is better at long range in general, although he is agile and good at dodging during close range since he's not physically strong so can't deal much damage without a weapon.
Weapons and belongings:

  • The rings on his bracers, his earrings and his crown are made out of some indeterminate fantasy metal capable of storing a large charge... once charged, he can use them like tasers, or throw them at people, or use them to absorb electric shocks being thrown at him. 
  • His pockets are usually filled with various random snacks so he doesn't go hungry. 
  • He also carries some concealed knives made out of the same material, so he can stab you... with lightning. 

Other skills:

  • He looks like a cute little kid. And if he doesn't open his mouth and say something rude, he might appear cute and innocent, which could throw a few people off long enough for him to gain an advantage, you know.
  • He really likes food, and accordingly he can eat a lot in relation to his size. 
History: Toren was the prince of some fantasy country and Jaya was his half-demon general/bodyguard. And that's literally it. I don't know any more than that because I lost my first deviantArt account which had all their refs, comics and stuff on there, and I was stupid and didn't back anything up, so this is all I can remember. I never finished their story, and just drastically redeveloped both the characters and the plots into newer versions.
I give my opponents permission to kill this character: Yes! Don't feel obliged to be nice to him cause he's a little kid; you are totally free to do away with him in the most gruesome ways possible. In fact that's the one condition you have to fulfill if you want to kill him - it has to be as violent and horrible as you can possibly make it :D

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Pre-Round Page Losses:
Powers: 
  • Tactical/strategy knowledge is locked, he is still incredibly smart but lacks the specific depth and detail REGAINED ROUND 1 - EDITS -  he has regained his skill and has even more experience than previously -about the level of a seasoned tactician much older than him
  • The exact ranges, power level, and limitations of his lightning summoning skill, reduced to intuition and guesswork rather than calculation and precision REGAINED ROUND 4 - EDITS - he has the control over his lightning back, and he totally souped the page up himself so now it's better everything, like wider range, tighter control, less energy-taxing... (fuckin OP as fuck, this is why Caspian and Spinner were changing the pages for you, you little shit)
  • All his electrifiable jewelry (still has the small knives and the dagger) REGAINED ROUND 2 - EDITS - he has all his jewelry back now. No other changes.
Memories: 
  • How he died (he is aware he is dead, but doesn't know how - he's hoping it was at least going out in a blaze of glory but will be very disappointed to rediscover he was replaced by another version) REGAINED ROUND 3 - EDITS - He remembers in lovely excruciating detail his capture and subsequent execution by the opposing side in the war. Also believes Jaya betrayed him and caused his death. Now full of conflict, mistrust, and paranoia.

Persona: 
  • Any genuine niceness he had that wasn't an act is now locked. Legitimately a spoiled brat asshole now (and if he's being nice, that means he is basically 100% acting and has ulterior motives)

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